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Immortalize my fears by ~fairyboo:iconfairyboo:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




This fruitful kiss,
Blessed from cherry lips -
I lie here and long.
A dying thirst -
A quenching desire -
A need to feel this romance.
Sleeping willows!
Blissful treasures!
Your eyes as they dance
Through moonlight trances.
As I lie here -
Smoothered in your gentel embrace.
I wish for more.
I pray for more.
An overwhelming desire to connect --
But...
Still I lie here.
Quiet and softly,
I whisper the words I long to breath.
Wandering fingertips,
Caressing,
Gliding,
Thrilling ecstasy;
Enticed fantasy.
I wish for your prescence.
Amid this perfect solitude,
My aching body screams for you.
Beneath this calm exterior -
Is held a battle of desire.
But I lie here in wait.
Watching you become your dreams -
As I slip away in my melancholy mood,
And wish to embrace you crimson lips,
Your tender kiss immortalize my fears.
I weep no more.
Sorrowful anguish abolished.
The dawn closes in
And my nightmare ends!
©2003-2009 ~fairyboo
:iconfairyboo:

Author's Comments

As i lie there at night and watch you sleep all i wish for is my goodnight kiss the one that kills the devil and banishes the evil spirits! I need that blissful romance to dance upon my lips!

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*soluscado Jul 28, 2003, 11:53:59 AM
I love it!! :D (Big Grin) You do an excellent job of conveying a tense buildup of desire and passion, without release. It kind of just dissipates at the very end, without actually fading or erupting.
:iconobsidianblade:
~obsidianblade Jul 29, 2003, 3:54:03 PM
Sometimes they mingle and the tragedy makes one wish to weep.

--
Spirits enforce, art enchants.

Comment, to get comments.
Share your kindness, not your hate.
Love the art, before yourself.

In art honesty is not only the best but the only policy.
:iconliopo:
~liopo Aug 3, 2003, 9:41:25 AM
Very nice poem.

"
As I slip away in my melancholy mood,
And wish to embrace you crimson lips,
Your tender kiss immortalize my fears.
"

Amazing, indeed. Very well written. :) (Smile)

--
"Behind those grey and lonely eyes
unforgotten by time
reality is dawning
our spirit is awakening
and somewhere in the hurricane
hope is waiting
crying in the distance
and calling out your name"
:icondipped-in-hunni:
~dipped-in-hunni Aug 6, 2003, 1:56:05 PM
I like your style, the words used were perfect, the whole desire until the very end, was great! Clap this one i have to make a fav hehe just love it =) (Smile)

--
love nessie.xx
:floating:
you're lost 'til you're found..but i'm for ever lost..
:iconscampi:
~scampi Aug 11, 2003, 4:17:16 AM
i wish that we could both have that last kiss of night before we slip off into our dream world...but hey we dooooooooo hehe :) it is most defo all u make it out to be here and more, without it i could never sleep as well as i do wen am with you :)!
...and jus to do the whole ciritique thing:
Sleeping willows!
me loves this play on words! and i think u no why :giggle:
i love you o sooo much :kiss: for always and forever!!!
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